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Genre- performance based vide, rock star conventions =].

Relationships- Relationship between lyrics and visuals - performing in the living room (LIES) "dancing in the living room".

Camerawork- All shots framed and shot well. variation of shots is good. Performance framed and shot well. Close ups when neccisary. Fish eye lens. Good use of wide shots and close ups - not too many. Uniform shots of each band member = cool. Lots of low and high shots.

Editing- Split screen at end is good. Sped up shot of girl standing near lion yard. Sped up parts are good. Roundabout spin good (LIES). Fast cuts add effect. When background is moving behind Ruth it is clever (no grammatical sense).

Mise-en-scene- Costumes and bright colours work well.

SFX- Flashing is good. Spinning effect. Range of close ups and mid shots. Split screen. Slow mo. Stars on faces good theme. Suits genre =].